This is really bad.
Im sorry, i know you probally put alot of time into this and all. But i mean, You could probally keep the colors in order. I say the guys hair color like on his shirt. This really sucked ass man. There was no animation, no nothing. Why would you put credits? its not like your a pro. Your a fucking uber nub. Just keep working on stuff. use gradients. Use onion skinning and do frame by frame animation. Keep tryiong. But dont submit shit like this again. Please.
-wes